The bear chills.
The polar bear has his mouth clammed shut.
And his shield is his cubs, as he pulls to get away.
The bear’s nose smells the beautiful fish awaiting to be eaten.
The cubs smile as the wind flows.
The bear is as white as the snow, the bear is camouflage.
The bear’s eyes are like a dash being used in punctuation.
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We really like the powerful and interesting vocabulary that you have used.
How did you generate the fabulous words you’ve used?
Maybe you could up-level by adding some adverbs.
We have enjoyed reading and listening to your great poem, thank you.
I like your interesting information about snowy polar bears.
Maybe try to yoose adverbs.
I liked the poem, thank you.