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7 Responses to “The rainbow”

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    Maya October 8, 2020 at 9:25 am

    It was really good but there has to be a comma after bright

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    Anonymous October 8, 2020 at 9:32 am

    I really like the way you described the rainbow as eye-caching. Maybe you could improve it by describing how it floated around?

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    Harry October 8, 2020 at 10:28 am

    I really like your metaphors.
    I would make the poem a little bit longer instead of one sentence.
    why did you choose the rainbow?

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    charlotte October 8, 2020 at 10:31 am

    Dear sacred heart
    I really liked (THE RAINBOW) i liked the first sentence of it ,it was really good and the other ones especialy the fist and last ones eneyway keep up the good work bye

    charlotte b

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    Olivia October 8, 2020 at 11:48 am

    I really liked the word glimmering you used.
    Why did you think of a rainbow.
    Maybe you could use another word for bag.

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    Lena kowalska Lenafrom aveley primary school. October 8, 2020 at 7:51 pm

    Good work.
    Maybe you can up-level your sentence.
    Why a rainbow????🤔

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