The summer lake
You are a memory of last summer lake shimmering on the land making the scene the fish are swimming peacefully the ducks eat on the bread from the tourists care joyful .Sky is a face of joy, the trees are a strong oak trees blowing in the wind.
I like how you have described the lake alot and used amazing adjectives.
Did u want to stay on the one topic (the lake) or other topics?
Maybe create it in small sentances -break it down- otherwise this is amazing and love the adjectives.
Try and make the sentences shorter but it was amazing.