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The summer lake

You are a memory of last summer lake shimmering on the land making the scene the fish are swimming peacefully the ducks eat on the bread from the tourists care joyful .Sky is a face of  joy, the trees are a  strong oak trees blowing in the wind.

2 Responses to “The summer lake”

  1. I like how you have described the lake alot and used amazing adjectives.
    Did u want to stay on the one topic (the lake) or other topics?
    Maybe create it in small sentances -break it down- otherwise this is amazing and love the adjectives.

  2. Try and make the sentences shorter but it was amazing.

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