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You are poem

You are an abandoned bike that leans against a lonely tree 

You are an abounded bike that is begging to be ridden 

You are an abandoned bike with the wheels off

You are a bike with a rusty seat

You are a bike with rusty wheels

You are a bike broken headlight

You are a bike with a garden ornament 

You are a bike with broken handle bars

You are a bike leaning against the tree with a spider web on.

You are like a bike that has stopped moving

One Response to “You are poem”

  1. Jamie.grossmith@belmont.lincs.sch.uk October 15, 2020 at 10:36 am

    Hi Harley
    1. I really like the line “You are an abounded bike that is begging to be ridden”
    2. What spider the web is from?
    3. Maybe you could say what happened to the bike to stop it moving.

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