3 Responses to “Season’s Haiku”

  1. I love how you used different seons in stead of one.
    Which seons did you choose?
    Make it a little shorter.

  2. I like the part where it says hot sun mwlts ice creams!
    Why was it ice cream?
    You could change barbecue to fish and chips if it is summer.

  3. 1.I like your vocabulary.
    2.Can you describe the ice cream.
    3.Describe things more.

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