Season’s Haiku
Orange leaves pumpkins,
fireworks, misty days and hot soup,
crisp leaves warm clothes to.
Hot sun melts ice creams,
barbecue in salty air,
children play in parks.
New blossom on trees,
baby animals eating,
fresh fruit and flowers.
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I love how you used different seons in stead of one.
Which seons did you choose?
Make it a little shorter.
I like the part where it says hot sun mwlts ice creams!
Why was it ice cream?
You could change barbecue to fish and chips if it is summer.
1.I like your vocabulary.
2.Can you describe the ice cream.
3.Describe things more.