The Bicycle
The Bicycle
The bike rests,
an exhausted runner panting like a dog.
Its handle bars stick out like a rabbit’s ears.
The wheels are delicious doughnuts.
Spindles as thin as string.
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This poem is really good. I really like how you performed it.
1)I really like how you described it as bunny ears.
2)Can you do some thing about the bell.
3)I don’t think you need inprovment.
1) I love when you added a lot of similes.
2)Can you please name the bike e.g. BMX?
3)Maybe name the dog too e.g. poodle.
1) This is very creative and has lots of similes.
2) What are your other ideas for other poems?
3) Maybe you could add some more to it.