The frosty snowman
The frosty snowman,
standing still like a straight new house
looking sad like always just looking for someone to play with.
The frosty snowman,
standing still like a straight new house
looking sad like always just looking for someone to play with.
I think this title has s good because it is all about winter
1.We like the theme. 2.Where are your capital letters and commas. 3.We think you could add to your excellent poem.
Over all well done!
Kind regards Katie Thomas
I think your poem is really interesting.
Why is frosty alone?
Maybe next time make it a bit longer.