The Pirate
As a horrible look spread across his face, the pirate stared.
The pirate took a large cigarette and popped it into his mouth.
As disgraceful as he looked, he worried for his crew for a second
As a danger laid below of the giant squid known as the Krakken.
Blood dripping down his cheek, he looked at this
and imagined it covering all his friends.
He was a thoughtful one for the curse of the black pearl
rested on his heart.
Blood shed scattered his memory.
I love your idea and I especially love the part where it says a horrible look spread across his face. It sounds incredible . Maybe try some new openers.