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Winter Feelings

Crisp December morning.
like ice melting
soft snow beneath my feet.

Mince pies taste of melting gravy
sleigh bells ringing in my ear
Fire cracking and sizzling.

Soft gloves on my hand
shivers go down my spine
winter midnight.

3 Responses to “Winter Feelings”

  1. Reply
    Anonymous October 9, 2020 at 10:02 am

    I love you poem and the description! One thing you could inprove on is you punchuation!

  2. Reply
    Sofia October 9, 2020 at 10:05 am

    #1 I really love the vocabulary
    #2 what was the image in your head for this poem
    #3 this was great but can you make it longer

  3. Reply
    Aleksandra October 9, 2020 at 10:25 am

    1.I really like the title, it makes sense and and I really like the first paragraph.
    2.At the beginning of the first paragraph, why did you write ‘Crisp’?
    3.After ‘morning’ you did a full stop and then you did not write ‘like’ in capital letter.Could you go through your poem checking punctuation?

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