Winter Wonderland
Glistening snow falls,
Trees sway in the peaceful wind,
Christmas puddings flame,
Presents sit under the tree,
Freezing snowballs fly quickly,
steamy hot chocolate,
Reindeer sit on cold damp snow
Glistening snow falls,
Trees sway in the peaceful wind,
Christmas puddings flame,
Presents sit under the tree,
Freezing snowballs fly quickly,
steamy hot chocolate,
Reindeer sit on cold damp snow
in the first verse its only three lines and you did four lines but other from that it was great
Even without the title I know it is a winter haiku.
Keep up the good work.👍🤩😀
From Lilly
I like how you did the Christmas pudding flaming what made you think of this and I would put reindeers instead of reindeer it makes more sense.