2 Responses to “Guess me.”

  1. Firstly, I was attracted to your poem because you included an element of ‘fun’ by teasing us with the title! I wanted to play the game and work out which seasons you were describing. I think you did a fantastic job of capturing the essence of each season through the use of metaphors ‘veil wiping out the sky’ and emotional language ‘a struggle to live’. It stirred emotions within me so very well done to you!

    Did you intentionally use three words which use the same letters in different orders? Veil, vile, live? If so, great word play!

    Next time, could you use a metaphor/personification for the robin also? Instead of landing on the branch, he may have been patrolling it or dancing upon it, perhaps.

  2. It’s wynter btw

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