Freezing cold snow fills the ground
a blanket wrapping the ground
Baubles have been hung
Leaves crunch beneath
Like a colourful blanket
Rain falls hardly
Birds can be heard
Snow is no more it is gone
Sunshine is now back
Daffodils have appear
Young calves have now been born
Heat has struck we burn
Snowballs have been thrown
Roast can be smelt from miles away
Tweeting Birds are gone now
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Your poem is amazing, the way you used the syllables with all of those adjectives, but to make it even better would be if you added commas at the end of each sentence because it is a poem and some of your adjectives could be a little better, but keep up the good work Sammi!
Nice work Sammi your punctilious was brilliant.