Autamn breeze.
The atuamn breeze,
Maple syrup gathering, Squirrels hunting,
leafs falling, rain starting, Pumpkin finding in
the cosy dark nights.
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I like the whole poem, I like squirrels!!!
I like that you described what happens in that season and what animals/people do in Autumn.
I like how you described Autumn
What I like about your poem is your structure and vocabulary. What you could improve is to add on more because it is a bit too short.
I liked that you poem rhymed.Why did you add the cosy dark night.Next time you could make your poem longer.
I like how everything is linked to autumn. Did you spell autanm… I mean, autumn right? Maybe next time you could add more.
I like how everything is linked to autumn. Maybe next time you could add more.