Christmas joy
Scent of hot chocolate spreads joy around the town.Ice cold puddles not for jumping anymore.Roast dinner on this special Christmas day.
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1.really good piece of writing like it when it said scent of hot chocolate
2.where did you get the idea?
3.maybe you could improve on how the joy spreads
Hi Eva!
I like the scent of hot chocolate.
Do you do any more good poems?
can you add a bit mord on other wise well done!
Hello Eva!
1 I love your first sentence it really brings out Christmas spirit.
2 Where did you get the ideas from?
3 Maybe to make it better, instead of ice cold puddles you could put Icey puddles.
I love it and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work!