Oxford by Aimee
“I want my sisters!”cried Naomi. Naomi was a 13 year old girl who had two sisters , Ellie and Alesha. She had lost them in the vicinity of Oxford hospital. And now she was sitting on a wet, cold pavement in despair…
“I want my sisters!”cried Naomi. Naomi was a 13 year old girl who had two sisters , Ellie and Alesha. She had lost them in the vicinity of Oxford hospital. And now she was sitting on a wet, cold pavement in despair…
I like how you left a cliffhanger ,but I would love to see more.