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Boris Jonson and the flying turtle

Boris Jonson didn’t believe in flying turtles until a green circle was flying through his living room…”AHH”exclaimed Boris!He opened the front door to leave his house rapidly and go live in the house of parlements.

3 Responses to “Boris Jonson and the flying turtle”

  1. HI Eva!
    I like the fact that you named your writing Boris Johnson and the flying turtle.
    Could you describe a bit more about where this scene is?
    Also how did you think of a title?

  2. Hi,
    I like that you made the title fun and exiting.
    Why don’t you describe it some more and talk more about the flying turtle.
    What made you think of this what made you want to include a flying turtle

  3. I like how you did it about a flying turtle. Also very funny. From Seth SWW.

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