Midnight woke up at 12:45pm and everything was silent,She peeled off the bed sheet and creeped around upstairs.Then there was a strange noise downstairs *clink clank clonk*.Midnight was about to go downstairs to see what the noise was then out off the corner off her eye she saw that her dad wasn’t there. Midnight wasn’t afraid off all the haunted things she’d heard off until now…
 | Anonymous on what to do if you meet an alie… |
 | Michael Jones. on GRUESOME GOBLIN SEEN |
| Anonymous on 1st April Grammar Week 10 |
| Anonymous on 1st April Grammar Week 10 |
 | logan on 25th March Grammar Week 8 |
| Lydia on Short story opening |
| Lydia on The Boat of Lght. |
| Tilly on The Boat of Lght. |
| Anonymous on leter |
| Anonymous on leter |
| Elliot on Evacuee Letter |
| Tilly on The Boat of Lght. |
| Charlotte on The Golden Secret Chapter 1… |
| Lydia on Letter from a evacuee |
| Abigail on The Golden Secret Chapter 1… |
By the way, in the context of your story the off should be of. Otherwise, it’s great!