The subway
It was a rainy day in New York, a strange figure wearing a rabbit mask walked down to the subway carrying a suitcase made out of black leather. No-one knew what its contents were, or if it were the cold wet breeze making the hairs on the back of their neck stand up.
1.I like the idea of the strange figure in the mask.
2.What did the last bit mean.
3.To make this even better maybe you could add some suspence.