Suspicious yacht
Thunder and Lightning entered the suspicious yacht. White tiger sharks surrounded the boat. He touched the metal of the yacht and felt the damage. There was the smell of danger.
Thunder and Lightning entered the suspicious yacht. White tiger sharks surrounded the boat. He touched the metal of the yacht and felt the damage. There was the smell of danger.
I think u can use more details and improve on you’re adjectives.
I liked how you used the phrase “White tiger sharks”