The chair in the corner was creepy . All around, smashed windows stared. I shivered. In the corner lay brown and dusty box. Shaking, I opened it. Nothing. Nothing but a dead looking shape. When an eye flickered open, I ran as fast as I could!
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Amazing story, I love the creepy setting!
Do you like vampires?
Maybe next time you could add a bit more detail.
I really like the idea of the creepy climate.
Where did you get the idea from ?
I would suggest to make he sentences a bit longer/ Add more description.