Harry stood staring at the house, with his heart hammering as loud as a boulder crashing. He couldn’t stop staring at it. It was like the house was calling his name. Suddenly, he heard a door slam as he saw a gate covered in moss and rust in the distance. Carelessly, he ran over to the gate tripping over weeds and broken branches. Two steps away until he got to the gate as he felt a weird feeling build up inside of him. Gingerly, he took his left hand and placed his fingers onto a mysterious button and lightly pressed it. The gates flung open as water splashed off them. Harry was in. Stepping over to the house, a dark cloud grew overhead. Without warning, tall trees fell, the windows shattered and lightning flickered. Spiders crawled out of the windows. A awful smell ran up his nose making it hard to see. A shadow walked along the wall. He started to breath heavy. He started to regret coming here. Harry turned his head as the gate slammed shut. He was stuck.
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Well done Ava
well done ava
i loved your last sentence when you said he was stuck it was a good ending to end it