Pitch Black Manor
Lily slowly tiptoed towards the entrance. She reached the door, slowly creaked it open and peeked inside Pitch Black Manor. On the ceiling , there was a spider fighting it’s way across it’s web. On the floor, blood scattered everywhere. In the corner, dead skeletons stare at Lily.
i like the creepy bit.
I love how the spider is fighting its way across the web.
Why is it called pitch black manor.
You could use another adjective in the last sentence other than dead.