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Pitch Black Manor

Lily slowly tiptoed towards the entrance. She reached the door, slowly creaked it open and peeked inside Pitch Black Manor. On the ceiling , there was a spider fighting it’s way across it’s web. On the floor, blood scattered everywhere. In the corner, dead skeletons stare at Lily.

2 Responses to “Pitch Black Manor”

  1. i like the creepy bit.

  2. I love how the spider is fighting its way across the web.
    Why is it called pitch black manor.
    You could use another adjective in the last sentence other than dead.

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