One sunny day Eva was sprinting after her big brother Ethan who was seventeen. He was annoyed with Eva becuse she wouldn’t play Fortnite with him. She ran down the road shouting  brother’s name.”Come back Ethan come back!” He wouldn’t listen to Eva. He had ran so far Eva couldn’t catch up to him. Finally Ethan stoped and Eva caught up to him she said she would play Fortnite with him as long as she could take the leed. “What screemed Ethan I allways take the leed “.

One Response to “Eva”

  1. There are a few punctuation errors
    Great description of the characters and their contrasts

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