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Opening

Once upon a time there was an old abandoned football filed it was called the the Lanreath filed it was wrecked there was a pub next to it and that was called the tipsy cow so i went to that to see if that was wrecked i tried to see but it was to foggy but when i got to it it looked like a world war.

One Response to “Opening”

  1. Can you read your story opening aloud to yourself, Gerard and work out where you need to put in punctuation?

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