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The experiment

After the failed experiment in the science lab, it was rumoured that a monster was unleashed but nobody had even seen it face to face, until that night…  The sound of scraping on the walls had gotten louder, driving him insane.  The stench of chemicals didn’t help at all.  It stopped.  Silence.  Kevin needed to get out of there.  His spine quivered and then a hand grasped his shoulder…

3 Responses to “The experiment”

  1. Wow this was brilliant well done! I liked the title. Where did you get this idea from?
    Maybe and some speech next time.

  2. I liked your sentences but you could i prove some adjectives like instead of silent you could put silently so great work.

  3. I loved the description
    What happened next?
    Instead of silent you could’ve used hushed!

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