The Haunted house

Snow was falling and snowmen were being made. Lilly and her friends stared at the haunted school and they heard a voice from out of nowhere. “TURN BACK NOW!” But of course the ignored the voice.


The rain started to pour down and lightning struck the ground. The snow was no longer. In the old abandoned school a haunted room was filled with a lit candle and a blood stained knife. Lilly turned around and there sat in front her was a creepy doll and the doll watched her every move…. “Laaa, lala, la, laa, la.” she repeated.


The doll had menacing eyes and a creepy face. She had a black dress and black shoes and she follows Lilly wherever she goes. The creepy doll holds a blood stained knife.

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