The Unknown, Colourless Figure by Kodi@Belmont
Although Adam was petrified of horror movies, he swiftly entered into the bedroom. Perched on the windowsill was an unknown, colourless figure. The miniature lady, who seemed to have a vintage dress and looked poor, appeared ashamed of something. As her eyes glanced down at Adam, she held out a hand as if she needed help. It was the wrinkly hand of an old woman.
I like where you said a colourless figure
I love the detail of the old woman on the windowsill.
Why did she want help?
You could say she looked like a worn down toy.
Hi you’ve done one good job with this writing, I like the first sentence the best.