What happened…
Nathaniel was running, he didn’t know who from. He heard many car noises, too afraid. He saw a black van named ‘shelter’.
He ran to the van and it was a really deluxe place. He rested in a great place but, all of a sudden, the van was moving. He couldn’t get out… It got darker and darker……
It then was eerie, so very eerie. A tall black, plain beast then opened the door….. “Nathaniel…. your mine…. “AHHHHHHHH”…………
I really love this story and really like how you used ellipses at the end I wonder what will happened?