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Bella

Bella gazed around the room in horror. There was a colossal spiders web covering every corner of the dark, creepy room. It was a cold Autumn night, and Bella had been taking refuge in an abandoned mansion, or so she thought. Out of the blue, a corner of the spiders web moved which led to the other corner, which eventually led to the middle. Bella let out a silent scream. She wanted to run, but she found that her legs were glued to the spot, she was paralyzed with fear…

One Response to “Bella”

  1. This is such a good opening! I love the use of ‘paralyze’ at the end. Maybe you could extend this a bit?

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