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Bob

Bob wandered around a dark room the piano started playing, Bob turned around and screamed.He was horrified a doll was playing the piano suddenly the lights went out but then Bob felt something sharp touch his neck.The lights where on again though the doll was going to kill him then he grabbed the doll and threw him away but the doll appeared next to the door and giggled and said you cannot escape me! What could he do?

11 Responses to “Bob”

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    riley December 10, 2020 at 9:35 am

    I like the grammmar and punctiation

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    Anonymous January 21, 2021 at 10:18 am

    i like that the way you used terrific words

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    Anonymous January 21, 2021 at 10:20 am

    I noticed that your poem is with a scary doll and I am saying that I really like horror so I think you did a great job 👏

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    Anonymous January 21, 2021 at 10:40 am

    I like at how there is a doll playing a piano.

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    Anonymous January 21, 2021 at 10:41 am

    nice vocabulary

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    Anonymous January 21, 2021 at 10:41 am

    i like your pronunciation and sentences but what i dont really like is that this is a whole paragraph😃

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    Anonymous January 21, 2021 at 10:42 am

    I like it very much you did a great job. How was the doll trying to kill him?

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    Kyron January 21, 2021 at 10:45 am

    This poem is very funny, well done

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    Sophia January 27, 2021 at 10:26 am

    Nice job but you could use a bit more vocabulary.

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    Anonymous January 27, 2021 at 1:43 pm

    Hi I like the poem really spooky
    Well done!!

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    Mohammed February 11, 2021 at 1:34 pm

    I like the story and the things that happened! (Hope Bob is okay. 😅😅) Was Bob the doll or did he see a doll? Maybe try improving your grammar and spelling.

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