The lives of feelings
Ellie slipted into the Nowhere emporium feeling down hearted. Then she was fixated on a candle that lit up the dark, spooky room. Next to the candle layed as still as a rock, picking up dust was the green book of wonders. Ellie stepped around looking at old clocks and crocked books.
I love your choice of word – fixated.
Can you add some details about Ellie so that I can visualise her more clearly?
Edit the sentence starting ‘Next to the candle’ to make it make sense.