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The Man by Freya@Emporium

The storm howled in the misty sky. Screaming in the house below, graveyards shook. My heart beat quickened. I shuddered. Who was that?

Far away I noticed a figure coming towards me. Whoever it was they carried a parcel. They shuffled across the path keeping their distance from others not wanting to be seen. An eye flickered, I could not believe my eyes, it was him! The man with the long black coat, who I’d seen yesterday.

2 Responses to “The Man by Freya@Emporium”

  1. 1 can you add more adgetives
    2 good punctuation
    3good story about a scary man

  2. 1.Explain the the weather better.
    2.Talk more of the house.

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