The secret attic.

Quietly,David walked into a mysterious attic and he saw a fire  place that started to crack. As soon as he opened the window all the glass smashed and David was shocked. Then he heard flys buzzing ear the pipes that were gurgling very loud and he looked up the pipe and saw a dead rat. Then it started to rain heavily outside and the sun went down and the moon came up. The dusty floor creaked and David heard some kind of voice.After that the fire went out and the door slammed. David hid. Suddenly the flys flew out of the window and someone went into the attic but went strait out. Who was it? David ran home for his tea.

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