Christmas dragon!
Christmas Dragon
Christmas dragons are very friendly towards well-behaved children and are often extravagant when it comes to delivering presents. An examples of this is, writing to them saying they’re good and then dropping lot’s of presents down chimneys.
What they look like?
Would you be able to recognise a Christmas dragon if you saw one? If not, then with this description you can! They have joy-filled eyes – sought of a hazelnut colour , wrapping paper scales, long, curved candy cane nails and their most thrilling feature of all: their tail! It is encrusted with peppermints which is perfect for self defence and a nice snack every now and then.
Where do they live?
It is rumoured that, Christmas Dragons live in the North Pole and are fed by Santa if they deliver the presents so he doesn’t have too. Naturally, many people believe this is not true because they cannot face the truth, but who knows?
Are they dangerous?
Many people surmise that they are not, but they can be very vicious at times! This is mainly in self defence though a few people have been attacked or haven’t came back… Be careful if you see one…!
I was dawn by the title of this – I wonder why? I really liked the way you clearly organised your work. I loved the description – the joyful eyes. It would be great to know about what to feed them just in case anyone finds one.
This is a great piece of writing! I like how you thought of writing about a Christmas Dragon!
*The subtitles make this writing really organised and clear- great!
*’Joy- filled eyes is a lovely way to describe them, and also very poetic.
Great writing, keep posting!
From Maggie SWW
Absolutely brilliant. Comical yet believable! I love the idea of the Christmas Dragon delivering presents and even more that he does it extravagantly! Great format, great layout. Easy to read. Just fabulous. There are a few spelling mistakes which can be seen when paying attention to the details ie; under the ‘what they look like’ paragraph you have written ‘sought of’ as opposed to ‘sort of’. I’d also maybe use a comma in the first sentence of the ‘Where does it live’ – do you know where it could go?
Thank you for all your comments everyone! I have edited my work with all your suggestions. Nobody ever comments on mine, so this was really cool!