The heaven dragon.
The heaven Dragon comes out only when it snows because he thinks it’s heaven. Surprisingly At this season if your lucky there’s a 50% chance you’ll find him in either your back garden or your couch.This dragon likes to come and play with people and has snow fights.The heaven dragon wants everybody to be happy but only when it snows beacause he only comes out when it snows.If your really lucky The heaven dragon will come to your home and make your supper with his fire breath.
I like the fronted adverbial you used.
How did you use the fire breath to make supper?
Next time it would be better if you put a comma after a fronted adverbial example Suprisingly.
Good use of words.
What does the heaven dragon look like?
Check your work/ punctuation.