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Trapped

Running, heart pounding, Elsie ran for her life. She entered a room she had never seen before. It was filled will boxes and crates all painted with some sort  symbol. All of a sudden, she heard a noise that sounded like scraping. She could only make out a small box in the corner of the room. It was rattling and shaking, but she had no time to worry about that she ran to the opposite corner and ducked behind a box. She could her them coming. She thought about what she could do.  

 

 Then she had an idea, she ran upstairs and there was a small trap door. As she opened it, and an black cat jumped out. She fell back and cut her hand. Then she pulled a little ribbon out of her pocket and wrapped it round. Then she said ” It came in handy after all. ” She jumped in and locked it. Luckily there was a red torch she turned it on. Then the trap door opened ” No I will never go with you, ” she screamed. Then she asked her self is this the end?

One Response to “Trapped”

  1. Hi,
    It is Frey’s from MrG’s Emporium
    I love this writing it is so so so good well done
    1) I loved how at the end you said is this the end and I really want to know if it is the end to.
    2) i like how powerful it is and it is like I could read it over and over again.
    3) I like how you have added speech and questions.
    Well done it is amazing.

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