Neon Dragons- Olivia SWW
There are many different generation of dragons and one of the most fascinating is a Neon Dragon. A small amount is known about this creature as it is afraid of anything and can blend into any neon colour.
Typically, every Neon Dragon is different; being different colours depending on the mood, mixed with its energy. Similar to a teddy bear, these animals are cute and the population would love them as pets. Many people believe that Neon Dragons are little purple dragons covered in neon spots. This is incorrect. As cute as they are, these creatures can be viscous when protecting their young.
Many Neon Dragons live in crystal caves all across Asia and chew on the crystals in the caves. Like birds, they migrate to Canada’s toy store to snuggle up with each over. Every so often, one or two are brought, taken to children’s homes, where they stay as cuddly toys, and never fly in day light again.
These dragons are only dangerous when they are eating, drinking or giving birth. Overwise Neon Dragons are completely harmless. Look very carefully through your toys and maybe just maybe there will be a Neon dragon cuddling itself in fright.
I like the imagination you used to think of this dragon!
Hi there, I really like this because it makes me just think for some reason but I really just liked this
Hi where did you get the idea of neon dragons its sooo cool.It is written very nicely.Have a nice day!!!!!
The idea of a neon dragon in my head is just so cool!
How can they turn into toys?
Maybe add more information about them at the children home.
Hi well done!!!Love you piece…
Really good. love your use of description
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Nice varied sentence openers.
Where did you get this idea from?
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1. I like your sentence starter
2. You have good good adjectives
3. Controlled punctuation
Maybe you could add what you need if you were to meet this dragon a some more fantastic information to describe your dragon but it is a outstanding piece of work well done
1. Great report I love the bit about disguising themselves as teddy bears
2. Where do you get the idea of neon dragons from?
3. I suggest to maybe split it into paragraphs.
Great job though!