We are many things.
You are a cool calm sea
at the seaside in Devon.
You are a luxurious spa
on a nice sunny day.
You are a glittery gemstone
shining in a cave.
You are a shining star
up in the night sky.
You are a beautiful
ballerina dancing on the stage.
You are a Barn owl
perched on an old oak tree.
You are a killer whale
hunting down your prey.
You are a fluffy half Maine ****
sleeping in bed.
You are a goldfish swimming
in the ocean.
You are a hot
summers day in Cornwall.
I like this because it has some alliteration and it’s a calm poem.
Why did you think alliteration is good to use in a poem?
To make it even better you could of asked a rhetorical question to the readers.