Wanted Dragon Hunter
Do you feel like you can take down a football dragon? Can you talk to football dragons? Can you tame football dragons? If so, then you’re the person for the job. You see, our sweet and
harmless village of Elsecar is being taken over by monstrous football dragons that are now getting terribly angry after not seeing football for such a long time, and we need somebody that only imagination can picture to lead the future harming beasts out of the village. If you are up for the job, then you need to sign up at www.freeElsecar.com/ to help us save our village!
Do you get a reward for this, you may be asking? Well of course you do! If you manage to free our village, then you will be granted the following:
- 10,000 bags of iron;
- A new horse;
- A lifetime supply of dragon hunting equipment;
- A new house;
- And a bar of gold!
Please please come and put your life on the line for our village as if you make it, it will all have been worth it!
I love the ‘sweet and harmless village’ phrase because it makes me want to come and save your village!
What special skills would your dragon hunter need?
Your writing might flow better if you split your very long sentence in the first paragraph into two shorter sections.
I like your poem because it’s got a lot of great writing so it’s really good.
1. i really like this it is good!
2.could you add a bit more?
3. how did you come up with football dragon
1. The whole piece of writing was amazing!
2. What mad you pick a football dragon?
3. Well done this too good I can’t think of an improvement!
Hello There, How are you? I think this was an amazing piece of text but I have a question Where did you get your ideas?
I have an improvement actually no improvement. Well Done!
1. I like the line harmless village in elescar.
2. How did you think of the prize.
3. You could expand on the last part.