You Are The Unknown
You Are The Unknown
You are a shining star
shooting through a dark damaging night.
You are a scarlet flame burning its
way through suffering air.
You are the moonbeam flickering from heaven.
You are a haunting shadow slowly
gliding towards our future.
You are calling to me over majestic undulating
landscapes of hope.
You are the peace to my overactive imagination.
You were the unknown.
This is such a haunting poem Isabelle, well done!
Dear Isabelle,
This is really powerful poetry!
Each new line holds such beauty.
Very well done!
Mrs. H
I love your poem Isabell i especially like the “you are a scarlet burning through suffocating air
I like the surprising sections, e.g. dark, damaging night…. suffering air…. undulating landscapes of hope….
Lottie
I like your poem Isabelle I especially like ” shooting through a dark damaging night”