Dragon Poem
Your flawless wings are precious bats
fluttering through damp air.
Your eyes are as threatening fire
burning through a cold shiver.
Your silky tummy is as scaly as a
shredded blanket.
Your spine is as bumpy as a
shipwrecked hull.
Your breath is as suffering like
a acidic breeze.
Your teeth are sharp and deafining
to life surrounding you.
Your demon eyes scan
around for unsuspecting prey.
You are my dragon.
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Such an imaginative poem Isabelle. I especially like your image of the dragon’s spine being as bumpy as a shipwrecked hull. Well done!
I really like the bit where it says his Demond eyes scan
I really like the part where it says his “Your spine is as bumpy as a
shipwrecked hull”
Wow! Isabelle I love that you have said that you are instead of you are like.
I found the first line very nice!
I like the way your dragon has a spine as bumpy as a shipwrecked hull.
how about next time add your amazing poem into a some verses?
I.really.liked.your.poem.and.its.powerfull.adjectives.but.to.make.even.better.next.time.you.could.maybe.instead.of.just.decribing.it.you.could.describe.what.it.is.doing!But.very.good!
Dear Izzy,
WOW! Another amazing poem this week.
The ending is terrific, a real twist and a powerful personal moment.
Well done!
Mrs. H
really good poem, well done
Hello Isabelle,
What a descriptive poem! I especially enjoyed your effective use of simile throughout this piece of writing.
wow! Isabelle I love your poem. it makes the image of it in mind.