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I’ve Never by Ayesha

I have never seen Mars, 

But I have seen the stars

 

I have never cooked, 

But I have eaten chips from the local Sainsbury’s.

 

I have never been to Brazil,

But I have went to the nearest park

 

I have never seen a Giraffe, 

But I have seen rats running around in the alleys.

 

I have never been to an ice rink 

But I have eaten ice cream on a warm summer’s day.

2 Responses to “I’ve Never by Ayesha”

  1. Reply
    Mariam SFD January 27, 2021 at 10:29 am

    Ayesha this is so good my favourite was the rats running around in the alleyway by the way you forgot a full stop on the Brazil part but if you keep this up you might publish poem books or work for a famous poem person.

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    Umar January 27, 2021 at 2:05 pm

    Ayesha I really liked how got each of your lines to rhyme and that it had different themes going throughout the poem. I can see that it is based on how you didn’t see those wonderful things and I really liked the idea of different themes.What you could improve is make is use one consistent theme but I still liked it anyway.

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