Pumpkin Dragon
Teeth like daggers nailing
into the pavement whilst walls are being DESTROYED
by massive cranes in many ways.
Breath like pumpkin pie
gobbled up in one gulp
shoot out like a gun bullet
a wink of an eye and that is gone.
Two eyes, no three eyes, staring at you,
a glimpse of three eyes,
in the midnight sun plopping around
like a swirling storming sky.
I love your poem Elowen it is great!
I really liked the last verse!
I liked the idea of a pumpkin dragon and i liked all of your descriptive sentences which you used to describe the dragon.
Dear Elowen,
You did a really wonderful job with your poem this week.
Like Basma, I really liked the final verse, especially the oxymoron of THE MIDNIGHT SUN.
Well done!
Mrs. H
they nice amazing poem elowen
That is such a good poem Elowen I like the idea of a pumpkin dragon the first verse is my favourite.
wow Elowen that was a great poem.
great poem the 2 verse is my favourite
This poem is AMAZING! My favorite bit was imagining the teeth and I like how you explained the teeth as nails. THIS POEM WAS OVERLY ENJOYABLE TO READ!
I really enjoyed reading your poem about your Pumpkin Dragon. I especially liked the description of the ‘swirling storming sky.’ Well done. You worked very hard on this this week.
AMAZING WORK! What with the description and all!