What?
What is quiet? Words on a page, an unknown secret yet to be told and candy floss clouds dreaming by.
What is harsh? Boris Johnson keeping us in isolation, long division sums that take forever to complete and rocking heavy metal.
What is comforting? A Mr Whippy on a hot summers day, a hug when you’re caught in a bubble of sadness and fuchsia sunset in the late afternoon sky.
What is shiny? A shard of glass glistening in the light, a newly polished wedding ring easily slid on a finger and a magpies kaleidoscopic wing.
What is frail? A skeletons finger pointing towards the past, a diamond compass dealt from under the sea and a room full of eerie silence.
What is quiet? Words on a page, an unknown secret yet to be told and candy floss clouds dreaming by.
I love the part where you said what are quiet words on a page
I really like this verse.
What is quiet? Words on a page, an unknown secret yet to be told and candy floss clouds dreaming by.
I also like this one it is really funny.
What is harsh? Boris Johnson keeping us in isolation, long division sums that take forever to complete and rocking heavy metal.
I enjoyed reading it.
Why did you do the first verse at the and at the bottom.
Hi Eliyana this is Anabelle from ChorleySJ. I really enjoyed reading this!
1. I really like this line: What is frail? A skeletons finger pointing towards the past.
2. What does kaleidoscopic mean?
3. I have found it really hard to find an improvement for this but could you put an adjective before skeletons finger, like bony or pale?