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Where do you get ideas from. Lily SWW

Where do you get ideas from?

A pencil in my hand,
my toes covered in sand.

Floating clouds in the sky,
motorbikes whizzing by.

I have lots of friends,
going round bends.

I want a pet bear,
but I don’t really care.

Glistening rock pools,
sharpening tools.

Holes in the ground,
cars making a sound.

One Response to “Where do you get ideas from. Lily SWW”

  1. Charlotte TA SWW February 4, 2021 at 12:22 pm

    Lovely writing Lily :D! No spelling corrections, perfect punctuation, all your capitals. Smashed it! Well done! I wonder if your sentence;

    I have lots of friends,
    going round bends.

    should read more like this:

    All of my beloved friends,
    who drive me around the bend.

    My suggestion is because the question/title of the poem is where you get your ideas from. You don’t have to say that your friends drive you around the bend 😛

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