Where do you get your ideas from? Jake SWW
Where do ideas come from?
Seek them.
In the depths of a rusty pipe.
Inside a shiny apple just turned ripe.
Search for it.
Inside the misty cellar
the mind of a fortune teller.
Find them.
Hidden in dark alleyways.
A campfire set ablaze.
Watch for them.
Stare at the glistening stars
and the pepper red mars.
Seek for it.
Inside his secret chest
and hope to find the best.
Search for it.
In the old crampy attic
in the boxes lead static.
I love the different examples you’ve used, I really like ‘Inside the misty cellar, the mind of a fortune teller.’ I can imagine the mind of a fortune teller would be so vast! Great work as always Jake, well done :D.
Be mindful next time to be consistent (this means done in the same way) with your punctuation. To begin with you use capital letters and full stops for each line, whereas some lines have no punctuation and some have full stops. Ideally for your piece of writing you would start with a capital and have a comma at the end of the first line, then full stop at the end with no capital on the second line.