When should it snow
When should it snow!
psome people beleave that it should snow all the time but others thing it shouldn’t.
The reason for that it is fun
the reason against this it is to cold
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I like how there is a bit of a story. Why are there so many grammar and spelling mistakes? Maybe next time add a bit more reasoning to your poem.
I really like how you you use a bit of a story. You could improve on you spelling and grammar. Next time you can make it a bit longer.