Sky star
I bet you’ve been on a hot air balloon but I know you’ve never been on a Sky star. Instead of me telling a super long story I’ll just tell you about the journeys 2 children have bean on with the Sky star. “Lenny”called Mandy “hurry up where going to be late”Screamed Mandy. Why Mandy was so full of screams is that it was there first time attending a adventure Competition. “I’m coming I’m coming” said Lenny anxiously. Of they go with there Carer All the way down the block to the big hall. They stood outside in the back yard.“wow this garden is huge”Said Lenny Surprisingly “i know I’m so Surprised we’ve never been here before” everyone was there as the host of the Competition said…“as we begin this event. If you win I am going to honer you a golden leaf.“what is a golden leaf” said Mandy. Everyone Gasped. “Oh my.
Y Y you don’t know what the golden leaf is”said the host. What do you think it is?
They left in there sky star and when to the first adventure point.
this is a very good piece of work, but try spelling things a bit better
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Really good Mia. I like how you have used speech to help move the story on. Next time, we will check your spellings together to make it even better.
I love, the fact you added dialogues but next time make your spellings correct!