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As the wind rushes through your hair as you take a deep breath in as you sail over the mountains of wales with your companion sandy the fennec fox (found and saved from an earthquake during a sandstorm). Suddenly the wind starts up and now the wind isn’t so nice it is tossing you around like a child with a ball chucking the air ship all the way over to the sea “SPLASH”
Amazing work I liked how you described the sea.What made you think of putting a fennec fox in?.You could make it better by using more full stops.