The Sky Ship part 2
The entrance to the ship was very difficult. The door was very small “for flight purposes” a lady answered in a weary voice. From that she noticed the lady was looking at her very muddled face. She finally entered after a few tugs from her friends. She looked around her; it was like entering a ballroom. Two butlers were standing beside them, one was holding a tray of fresh orange juice in glass cups and the other was holding a plate of cookies and a bucket of fish for muffin.
“Are..are you coming with us?” Mila said disturbed by the bucket of dead fish.
“No madam,” answered a butler in a very severe voice.
“We’se only stay’n until you settled in ma’am,” answered the other in a very strong cockney accent.
The three girls walked to another door saying “Bedroom” in very swirly writing. Odette seemed to have felt more secure that it looked safer than she thought.
Three beds were all centered in a circular room with two square windows on either side. Odette didn’t fancy the room so she went up to the top deck to wave to her mother. Most of the people had left but her family was still there as well as her friends’ families.
“I’m fine this is great, see you in a few months! Love you all!” she shouted. From the constant waving and blowing of kisses she knew they heard her. Muffin had already found the little pool in the corner of the ship and was swimming and splashing around.
Odette took out her tent bag and it unfolded with a press of a button. She walked inside at the front of the room. It had a half kitchen and living room and a flap into a bedroom. It had a blowup bed and a bedside table. Little did she know the starship already contained those things.
“Bleeeeeeep!, Bleeeeeeep!” All her friends headed to the top deck to wave goodbye to her parents. The ship was departing the dock when Mila noticed she forgot to bring her pet parrot Squawks. She ran to the edge of the boat and began to cry.
I like your vocabulary that you have used. It has made your story more interesting. What happened to Squawks? Could you maybe find another word for lady?